The older generations tend to have traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. Some people argue that these traditional ideas are not helpful in preparing the younger generations for modern life. Do you agree or disagree?
We are living in an era where the traditional beliefs and views are quickly left behind by the fast-changing society. When traditions no longer suit the society, people argue that old ideas would not help the young to adapt to modern life. While I agree some traditional views are useless and even restrictive, I doubt the opinion that all traditional ideas are helpless.
To begin with, we have to admit that some conventional thinking and behaviors has obviously decayed and even become limits for the younger generation. For instance, in ancient China, young girls should get married before the age of 25, otherwise they will be criticized and despised. Conversely, today, it is not wise to choose to get married unless one has a stable income and certain amount of savings. Obviously, these conservative and outdated traditions will soon become history.
Of course, that is not to say that we should underestimate the effect of old beliefs. Some traditional views do value, some are even precious in modern society. Although the economical and social environment is changing, something in root should remain unchanged. For example, ancient Chinese people attach great significance to working hard, which is still valuable and appreciated in today’s workplace. Other traditional characteristics in China such as politeness, honesty and good manners are still beneficial if young people can adopt them.
In all, although some old ideas are useless and even seem stupid, there still exit those of values. More importantly, we should recognize our capability and the importance in improving old conventions and inheriting the essence of our traditional culture.
Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'of course', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18 0.247107183377 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.163333333333 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.143333333333 0.0946595960268 151% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0666666666667 0.0501214627716 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0366666666667 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0366666666667 0.0403226058552 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91011661211 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266666666667 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00333333333333 0.00163938923432 203% => OK
Determiners: 0.0733333333333 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266666666667 0.021408717616 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.011925033212 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1673.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33712121212 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393939393939 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287878787879 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212121212121 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159090909091 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91011661211 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 66.4144373325 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8571428571 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5618497622 49.517814964 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 47.645021645 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.1875 1.69124875643 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394345367723 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0710664237008 0.102741220458 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0439823319011 0.0668466124924 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522853025821 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115923876949 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147962999382 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666141468855 0.0742795772207 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266626415647 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0522755303408 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256638505622 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804397954195 0.058150111329 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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