Undoubtedly, sophisticated technology make life more complex despite bringing quality in living standard. Owing to this, some gray haired people opine that people were live better way of life in past as compared to present scenario. I partially agree with the aforementioned notion. Although, in ancient time people were more active and satisfied but modern technology enhance the standard of living these days.
It is undeniable fact that due to over reliance on technology people are more lethargic as well as unhealthy. To clarify, nowadays with the new inventions of electronic gadgets people solely depends on technology which reduced labour work of human .As a result, they suffer from detrimental diseases such as heart problems ,obesity and many more. Apart from that ,it is very realistic to see that people of today's era are running in mad ratrace to cater their needs and fame to maintain their status in society which leads to isolated and stressful life .Even though they have not enough time to spend with their family as well as friends still they believe in gaining goals and money. Hence it is clear from above explanation that life is used to be more better in past .
On the other hand , in modern phase of life people have more comfort and luxurious life because of technical gadgets. In past ,people were illiterate and they followed unusual thoughts and miserable things but now their stereotypical mentality also change with time because they are more tech savy and advanced in comparison of past which make their life more valuable. What is more ,these days it is possible to cure fatal disease such as blood cancer and brain tumour with the help of advance medical at the blink of eye .consequently, it reduces the mortality rate and increase the life span of older people.
In conclusion, despite these changes it is often worth concerning that it not only effect the life of human being but it has also great impact on our environment which is more polluted in comparison of older times .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94705882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53436797252 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8798913422 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244951157914 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947748581187 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528856456695 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145340334694 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408774460867 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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