Societies in today’s world play a crucial role in bringing up people together and celebrating various occasions. Some masses opine that these groups are responsible for all the Immoral activities. This essay will attempt to discuss the reasons for the aforementioned view and who should be blamed for these activities.
To commence with, A Society mostly consists of like-minded people or maybe mankind from the same religion or caste, this particular section wants to dominate the other groups by going against the law. The greed to become the elite group in their places makes them create riots consequently, helps them to surpass people from different cultures/religions. A recent incident between Muslims and Hindus is a great example to discuss where individuals from both groups were involved in anti-social activities to gain upper hand over others.
Furthermore, Politicians and other affluent individuals are the ones that are responsible for making people involved in the atrocity. They try to support the clan that belongs to their caste or religion. In addition, they show superiority over other groups by their actions or activities which ultimately uproots the fundamental law of “ Right to Equality”, as a result, humans from various sections chooses an antisocial path to protest against them. For instance, a survey conducted by “The Hindu” a popular newspaper organization suggests that the people who fight against the landlords by breaking Law and order in Warangal are the ones that are once humiliated by them on a caste basis.
In a nutshell, people’s greed of making their group elite, that may be a religion, caste or culture in a particular area is responsible for activities contrary to social activities. The leaders and individuals with the power play a crucial role in developing this mindset in people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95647111582 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.231195359 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753329798196 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288800082093 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238786646926 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473971987257 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202115115667 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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