The older you get, life becomes more difficult. Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many researchers have found that the challenges in individual’s life get soar up as time passes. Though, I agree with the notion that the life of senior citizen is really a concern these days, where they are unable to chase the modernisation. In this essay we are going to examine few parameters which will illustrate the fact behind.
In this fast pace world, it is obligatory to be updated with recent technologies while elder age people may have difficulty to chase them. For instance, in back days, records were maintaining in hard copies while computer has replaced the whole scenario. Consequently, elder age group may not accept this change because the learning ability gets decrease when the age increases. Furthermore, in certain case due to digitalization in banking and business trading they may face same issue.
On the other hand, In this era when children are more focused to earn money, people leave their parents alone. As a result, they either take shelter in old age homes or sometimes NGO’s do take care of them. This would lead as long term mental illness for them. Additionally, in few cases when children immigrate to another country in search of better life and left their parents at home alone. As a result, this may also trigger to health issues for them.
To conclude, supporting my view, I do agree that digitalization might be a bottleneck for elder masses in certain case, unfortunately, they found themselves in trouble. In addition, sometimes children behaviour may create various health issues for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... create various health issues for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, really, so, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01167315175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74811766051 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5127106335 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0648924298514 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242042432239 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182253540234 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408984059327 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104296480016 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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