In this era of technology, life expectancy has shown drastic growth with better medical care. In this essay, I intend to show some wide-ranging positive and negative sides of medical care in our daily life.
With the tremendous development in the discipline of medical care, people can now take care of themselves efficiently. It becomes easy for their family members to hospitalize the patient where he will be taken care of by trained staff and advanced equipment. For instance, some fatal diseases like Cancer, Malaria are now being treated in a great way. people are getting advanced vaccinations for these diseases which were not cured by anyone earlier.
Seeing the other side of this advancement, which has some disadvantages too. People rely on the vaccinations and the other treatments for their comfort. They start taking the medicines without any prescription as they are easily available in the market. Sometimes, doctors also take the benefit of this advanced medical care by providing the medicines to the patients in bulk regardless of their health condition. Doctors are not petrified by the consequences of side -effects of these medicines.
In Conclusion, people should take the right benefit from this advanced medical care instead of misusing it. In my opinion, I think the advantages of this development far outweigh the disadvantages in a way of getting good treatment under the supervision of modern equipment and vaccinations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23206751055 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95244100753 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2910213399 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280837681311 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979613876407 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799932269325 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184339541005 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811910538007 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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