In this era of technology, life expectancy has shown drastic growth with better medical care. In this essay, I intend to show some wide-ranging positive and negative sides of medical care in our daily life.
With the tremendous development in the discipline of medical care, people can now take care of themselves efficiently. It becomes easy for their family members to hospitalize the patient where he will be taken care of by trained staff and advanced equipment. For instance, some fatal diseases like Cancer, Malaria are now being treated in a great way. earlier people were striving to get cured of these diseases whereas they are getting advanced vaccinations for these diseases now. From infants to elders, improved medical care has given us the opportunity to increase the life expectancy if compared the historical records from just one century ago. Healthy people can serve the country in an immense way. Nowadays, the government is making sure that no one should be deprived of these health benefits.
Seeing the other side of this advancement, which has some disadvantages too. People rely on the vaccinations and the other treatments for their comfort. They start taking the medicines without any prescription as they are easily available in the market. Sometimes, doctors also take the benefit of this advanced medical care by providing the medicines to the patients in bulk regardless of their health condition. Doctors are not petrified by the consequences of side -effects of these medicines. In addition, better healthcare benefits have given burden to the government as people lying on the bed for several years increase the government's expenditure.
In Conclusion, people should take the right benefit from this advanced medical care instead of misusing it. In my opinion, I think the advantages of this development far outweigh the disadvantages in a way of getting good treatment under the supervision of modern equipment and vaccinations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28662420382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86734585964 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5639683915 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290477519734 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854444764941 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689894041724 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184689054141 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054055946244 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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