One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development it outweigh the disadvantages?
In this technical era, technology has been being accelerated by leaps and bounds in medical field vis-á-vis other sectors. Owing to that, the life expectancy of human beings is inclined and they are living longer than the past. I think that, this evolution has more merits than demerits.
To embark with, most of the individuals consider the health as wealth. It is essential for all human beings to do some exercises in order to stay healthy and longer. There are humongous of changes happened and introduced many techniques for treatment : laser technique, which used for breaking stone in internal part of body, improve poor eye sights and many other purposes, due to these kind of developments many individuals recover from some hazardous health issues and live long. There are multitude of advantages. For an instance, as long as the life expectancy increase and human beings llive long then the government should incline working age of people.
Furthermore, medical care is extremely improved in most of the nations and mankind have been living longer and anticipation of life is inclined, it has plethora of benefits for families, nations: an increase in number of elderly people; decline in death rate of the country. For an example, one of the European countries - Russia, which is well-known for the best medical treatment and study among the all nations of the world, on account of low ratio of death, 3 to 4 generations are living together.
To conclude, it is very benevolent for the humans and county if people live longer : death rate of nation is decreased, the working age increase and number of generations live together in one family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
... in internal part of body, improve poor eye sights and many other purposes, due to these k...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... sights and many other purposes, due to these kind of developments many individuals recove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, well, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68293242386 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0514500235 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246738880247 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845310863099 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577566048729 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148143401034 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276006797063 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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