One of the debating issue in crime topics is high possibility of committing a crime for the criminals who have served their prison sentence. There are many reasons which lead them to reoffend after finishing their punishment. Yet, it is believed that not having proper skills makes them follow their old lifestyles.
The first significant proof why offenders may do an illegal act after being punished is the lack of rehabilitation programs in prison. With these classes, they would be able to gain several abilities and even would have a chance to change their behavior and beliefs. Under those circumstance, they will be able to turn over a new leaf. According to some researches, many lives have been modified after these programs have been held.
Furthermore, not only recovery programs have been able to turn wrongdoers to be a useful and positive people, but also by learning new talents, they will be able to have more job opportunities in the future. On the other hand, until they have not obtained up to date experiences in order to get a job after their prison sentence, they would struggle financially. Consequently, for that reason the risk of committing crimes more than once would be increased. Even though wrongdoers may have known much worse punishment and also judgment from society would propel to them because of the consequences of their crimes.
Overall, many causes with criminals would lead them to pursue their life before being arrested, but recovery programs in prisons have been the most essential way to stop this issue. And in other words, shortage of those will be the main principle reason for this concern as it had mentioned in this essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, so, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01382488479 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70583444845 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.973505258 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223616562139 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102883113334 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577517138032 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168215011459 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228597192413 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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