One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What are the solutions of this issue?
Large cities often face the traffic congestion in almost every corner of the highway. This happens in big cities because of the low quality of public transportation and the large number vehicles owned by citizens. However, the improvement of public transportation and the firm action of owning more cars are the effective solutions.
The first cause of traffic jam in big cities is the inadequate facility in public transportation. Some big cities still have unsatisfied public transportation which makes people prefer to private cars. The train and bus station are quality are still below the international standard, and the public vehicles are still uncomfortable to ride as the crowd and cleanliness are still unsolved. Therefore, the more improvement of these facilities which has been conducted by Singapore should done by other cities to increase the number of public transportation users.
Another perspective worth to mention is the large number of vehicles in big cities. It can be seen that the number of cars doubled in some cities, and it triggered the traffic jam. In addition, the way to get more cars is easy that there is no firm action from local authorities. Towards this issue, the number of vehicles should be reduced by giving high tax of vehicles. This will makes citizens think twice to purchase new cars while the tax is high, and it helped the USA to reduce the vehicles in 5 years.
All in all, the problems which cause traffic congestion in large cities are the low quality of public transportation and the large number of vehicles owned by inhabitants. Therefore, the effective solutions are the improvement of public transportation and the high tax establishment of having more cars. Eventually, those solutions will reduce the number of traffic congestion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have done' or 'do'?
Suggestion: have done; do
... has been conducted by Singapore should done by other cities to increase the number ...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... giving high tax of vehicles. This will makes citizens think twice to purchase new ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, still, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14383561644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93799691261 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452054794521 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1808263342 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174798480519 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710599435461 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749260852791 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12323879472 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607012408971 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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