one should obly use enough money to fulfill their needs and rest should be given to needy . To what extent you agree or disagree ?
It is true said that "Money isnt everything but everything needs money". In the current time of technological advancement one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic which asserts that should the money be gicen to the needy after the person has fulfilled his basic requirements or not ? i agree to this point upto an extent and shall explore the various aspects in different paragraphs.
to begin with, I would say that a person should firstly fulfill all his needs and the rest of the money should be given to the needy. This not only removes the gap between the rich and the poor but also leads to the economic development. If a person given 10-20% of his monthly income to the needy; the literacy rate will be increased which will further create a healthy environment around with less rate of malnutrition. This all will lead to the economic development of the nation. To bolster my perspective, a recent survey conducted by Indian government in 2017 ,stated that money donated by people in orphanages has helped to increase the literacy rate among 78% of children under the age of 20.
But as the coin also has two sides, this statement also raises an issue contrary to the point stated in above paragraph. Each and every person within the country like India pays taxes in form of gst, cgst but inspite of all this, 70% of the Indian population is still below the poverty line . here the question takes birth that where the money from the people is spent ? If tge money collected from local public is spent on raising the nation to a higher level, it would result in tremendous positive changes within the province and, here i believe that if a common man is paying all the taxes as a responsible citizen then he should not pay any extra amount to needy people. He should rather invest or collect hus earnings for his future usage . to illustrate i would state, a census conducted in India stated that still there is 68% indian population below the poverty line who are not able to fulfill three basic needs of the life.
As every clap requires both use of hands, I take a ground that the collide effort of both local public and the government can put a nation on the way to progress because as always said, government is of the people, for the people and by the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, still, then, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61800486618 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45387586277 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535279805353 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9322520771 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.533333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221005786836 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695014459628 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900653490042 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127423896177 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855158084365 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.