some people say that self employment is better than working for a company or institute. discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
It is truly said that "What exercise is to the body;employment is to the mind and morals".With the steady growth in industrialization, the lifestyles of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestones.Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. for instance, the given topic asserts that which employment is considered better for a human; self employment or a job? Through this essay , i shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that Self Emoloyment is better than getting engaged in a job. They strenghthen their view point by claiming that this kind of employment creates a sense of freedom among a person.The person who is self employed will relish the flexible time and working hours. He will not be bound to any work restrictions and will enjoy more and more profit which is fairly higher than the monthly income. The person will not only inculcate the leadership qualities but also he will be able to maintain the name and fame and the popularity the Entity will gain. I would like to bolster my perspective, by stating that a survey was conducted in march 2018 by Delhi University which revealed that 80% of indian young population has considered self employment better than the jobs and they regard the employer as a king of the firm.
Contrary to this, there is a opposing group of people who believe that doing a job is better than self employment. To make their arguements more convincing, they claim that jobs help to make a person more punctual and disciplined. Jobs not only enhances the confidence of a person but also polishes his personality and team spirit is inculcated within the employee. Secondly, person involved in a job gets rid of the procastination and has to work timely which regulate his dedication skills. A good illustration of this is the questionnaire conducted by the employees of the famous company Infosys which stated that 8 out of 10 employees have considered jobs better than self employment as jobs enhances the overall personality of the person and the worker escapes from the loss pressure as well as the burden of investment.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion. still, i take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands and according to me both types of occupations are good and all it depends on the interest, motives and likes of the person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92840646651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0146491918 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519630484988 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3708085399 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.375 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226664308976 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742530821518 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633568507222 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12549982474 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450810593511 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.