Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of work required?
As the proliferation of online shopping platforms allows people to purchase goods at their fingers’ tips, some argue that this “phenomenon” could have several impacts on the environment, henceforth, some urgent actions should be taken instantaneously including the co-operated effort of the Government agencies and individuals.
To begin with, e-commercials could be considered one of culprits behind the considerable increase in the amount of plastic waste. While in-person shopping provides buyers with simple-packaged products, online suppliers are required to package their products with far more quantity of single-used plastic bags, bubble wraps, or plastic tapes to spare those fragile products the fate of destruction. According to recent research, the amount of disposable plastic waste in Vietnam underwent a rocket by 2.5 times since the advent of commercial online platforms such as Tiki and Shopee, unfortunately, the figure is supposed to rise year on year.
The environmental outlook seems to be uncertain if there is no joint effort of ordinary citizens and the Governments in multiple aspects. First and foremost, the Government should introduce laws and impose so-called “green” taxes on online trades and delivery companies. To be more specific, refusal to make use of eco-friendly packaging materials such as biodegradable tapes of express companies should be strictly punished. On top of that, consuming-related courses are also of paramount importance. The last few decades have witnessed the dominance of trend-tagged items in online shopping, which acts as a precursor to the sharp rise in plastic packaging. Therefore, it should be the obligation of parents and schools to educate young consumers how to wisely evaluate the necessity of goods labeled as “trend” before buying.
In conclusion, to curtail the enormous amount of plastic waste caused by online trades, laws and taxes should be brought in by authorities, while as individuals, people had better avoid buying items without purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68300653595 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19657460361 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624183006536 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6492909664 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.090909091 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130291517429 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425034071725 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306144264773 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716228513472 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263178550167 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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