Nowadays, online shopping is significantly increasing. Also, shopping malls have drastically decreased, and at the same time, people who shop in person have greatly decreased. This shopping culture has brought many changes. Therefore, I am going to focus on this change and introduce it today.
First, how online shopping is affecting consumers? These days, there are so many online shopping apps coming up. Accordingly, the number of people shopping through apps is increasing dramatically. Shopping has become very convenient for consumers. When we were using the shopping mall to buy clothes, we had to look around various stores and look at all the clothes, so it was so tiring and took a long time. On the other hand, online shopping is very convenient because it is organized by price, design and color and you can buy it very quickly with one click.
Next, are there any cons of online shopping? As everything in the world has its advantages and disadvantages, online shopping also has cons. If we shop online, we can not see clothes in person, so it may not be the design you want or size may not fit. Therefore, there is a high probability of failure. In addition, there are often cases of fraud as if the goods were not delivered even though they were ordered for money.
Last, the online shopping makes jobs chaged a lot. We could see at least two employees in one store just by going to the department store. However, with the development of online shopping, the number of stores has decreased and the number of employees has decreased from more than two to one, which has greatly reduced the number of store staff jobs. On the other hand, some jobs are increase. For example, app developers, delivery people, factory workers, online store operators, etc. Therefore, many people say that online shopping has reduced jobs, but I think it increase jobs than before.
This is all about the online shopping. Online shopping gives people both good and bad effects, but even if you do not like it, it is no way to change it. Therefore, in the future, we should improve online shopping by fixing problems instead of thinking negatively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 568, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, at least, for example, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85286103542 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58207995339 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539509536785 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1749509425 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2083333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2916666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211163415457 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753802132796 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540703017134 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131758442455 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431238249721 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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