only the government action can solve housing shortages in big cities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Housing crisis has become a substantive issue in urban society across the world, and this has led to an opinion that only when the government has taken actions, can this problem be alleviated. Nevertheless, although the governmental involvement is essential in certain areas, it cannot single-handedly address housing shortages.
the state intervention has proved to be highly effective in providing those with disabilities or with disadvantaged backgrounds with either housing allowance to help them purchase private accommodation or directly with economical houses. Such housing policy has, in fact, laid foundation for the poor to graduate from their poverty, closing the gap between the haves and haves-not.
Nevertheless, the governmental control over the housing market can stultify the development of this industry and simultaneously, impose financial constraints on the national budget. For instance, with the approval of an overarching design by the authorities, apartment blocks and other residential houses would be erected in a similar fashion, and therefore, the city landscape would be monotonous. And such excessive uniformity, especially in the size and number of rooms, will fail to meet the citizens’ requirements on properties. Consequently, housing reforms will have to be conducted so as to remedy such design faults, thereby consuming an inordinate portion of national resources. By contrast, should the participation of private property developers be encouraged, not only will it release the state from the burden of financing large-sized construction programs, but also foster the housing industry. For these reasons, the housing sector should only be dictated by the market, rather than a government’s will.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that governmental intervention is essential in certain aspects of housing market; However, this action should not interrupt the supply and demand relationship. As a result, to thoroughly tackle the housing issue, the joint effort of both the government and private sector is required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7737704918 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25647557386 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9103161267 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147697388753 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566331077969 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345530626044 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912255192499 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329666242265 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.