The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, the booming number of accidents on the roads makes people worry when driving. some people argue that the sole solution for this fact is posing greater chastisement to those who break road traffic laws. In my opinions, I partly agree with this statement for the following reasons.
On the one hand, stricter punishment is an essential way to contemporarily decrease roads offenses. drivers must be punished with pecuniary penalty for small mistakes like not stopping when the traffic light turn into red or not wearing helmet. The results thus affect directly to the offense's financial status, which make them more carefull everytime driving. Moreover, goverment would also forfeit driving license, which is more severe, for those who commit many times. if they are not reserved the right to participate in traffic, they would re-think about their behaviours and realize that they should not drive in that way. As a result, being not allowed to drive for three to six months will cut down the rate of drunken and over-speed drivers.
On the other hand, there are more effective solutions to enhance road safety. Government should allocate more resource to bettering the quality of road. It is apparent that the pot-hole is the main reason causing numerous accidents in the roads. if we can reduce the quantity of blockhouse meanwhile remake the roads, drivers will not get some troubles in the early morning or late night. Furthermore, focusing on traffic flow is a good idea to make lane in the road. when driving in the suitable lane, we can avoid the crash between huge containers and motors.
By way of conclusion, I think there are many ways to better road safety other than punishing strictly to the drivers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, i think, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99652777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49083727913 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2558780287 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172339090788 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547179543175 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063989543389 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112191493452 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573762666441 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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