When humanity was born, they acquired the availability of natural instinct. Have you ever wondered that how nature or nurture affect on yourself? Although I concede that genetic element is influential to some extent, I believe that environmental factor would be the core origination in children institution.
Obviously, brilliance have coexisted naturally in such individual since they was born. People are able to aware of them through their remembering or language capability such as early speaking. Perhaps this is triggered by parents ( mother accounts for 70 percent ) which is also clever and sagacious. Researchers in Glasgow, England explain this: because women have the XX chromosome while men have the XY set, the mother has the ability to pass on the intelligence gene to her baby. they are more than men. Therefore, not only does nature but also assist children to have cognitive skills and logical thinking.
From my perspective of view, nurture has long been generated to stimulate the perception of offspring. It is an undisputed fact that the family and schooling are superb workplaces to occur a plethora of changes. First, children which are procreated in intellectual household would be caring, sharing, and helping thoughtfully. They are invariably paying ahead to them about daily life irrespective of eating and schooling. Such facilitation to children can promote their gift and resilience. For example, if your family budget is sufficient to be invested in the institution, you will inherit study tools and lore from the online course or extracurricular course. Students stand a good chance of gaining a scholarship and have a well-paid job in the years to come because of diversely knowledgeable resources.
The learning environment is a vital aspect of our study. Teachers always convey lessons in each subject including mathematics, literature, English, and so forth through scaffold. Viet Nam is one of the most comprehensive education in Southeast Asia but they still have issues in producing academic book at first grade. Words is lack of politeness and have no coincide in this age. Therefore, the lessons would be less entirety and teachers could teach the wrong lecture. Last but not least, the pedagogue is playing an important role in education. Thanks to learning accurately, the future generation will be shinning.
To recapitulate, the nurture outperform the nature in influencing in children education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40885416667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00765692238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643229166667 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5188841341 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5416666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20833333333 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821060557704 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241556454895 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362572884605 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531055885897 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023925250088 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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