Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
advertising is an omnipresent trend that gains much citizen publicity in the modern age. some people contend that it confers advantages and vice versa. From my perspective, I concur with the former. Specifically, this essay will shed light on this controversial issue.
There are some demerits when adverts exist in our living. Agency networks tend to design posts or videos of products attractively. therefore, advertisers crave purchasing more items when they receive adverts on social media such as facebook and Tik Tok. Unfortunately, customers lost that quality outweighs nice models. For instance, I ordered a hoodie at Shoppe. Sales assistants use superfluous and ornamented speech to exaggerate their products. At that time, I realize images are for illustrative purposes only.
There are several merits of advertising. it helps people find products effortlessly because the algorithm connects the purchaser to goods. For example, people search how to make Tonkatsu on Youtube. Then, they scroll facebook, and lots of ingredients of this dish exist. Undoubtedly, advertising is convenient for people to get information. The adverts benefit individuals, but they can also help people be aware of environmental and medical problems. The vegetarian restaurant can introduce their foods to people who want to alleviate the consumption of animal meat. therefore, advertising is beneficial.
To recapitulate I agree that advertising makes huge strengthen. The merits outperform the demerits in advertising. The living standard and civilian's perception would become ameliorating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76595744681 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16086297962 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0733648454 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5909090909 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6818181818 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134660240007 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358055726463 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364419958914 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776167926078 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159083937553 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.6 11.3001002004 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.0 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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