In recent times people are tend to be similar to prominent persons from television or magazines. This essay will discuss the issues related to this problem with reasonable perspective.
One reason why people are trying to copy famous people is generally according to development in the technology, especially related to media. People are spending leisure time in front of online live translation, watching sports or television show. It seems that people from the screen or magazines are closer than they used to be. Therefore, humans are trying to mimicrate to their success and knowledge. Hence, the vast majority of people are trying to be the same as the idol.
Furthermore, this tendency has a great impact on growing auditory, especially for young people. The example which is shown by famous person could play a positive role in child's education. The scientists, enterpreneurs and businessmans, for instance, can share their own experience and give an advice of the future life and skills. If people follow the lifestyle of outstanding person, they would reach any summit they want. In short, the role of famous persons is indispensable in the age of technologies.
In conclusion, the people are copying the remarkable persons from television or newspapers, because of the enhancement in technologies and I think it is beneficial to people in terms of the experience and progress they could get.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...can share their own experience and give an advice of the future life and skills. If peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21585903084 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94364780367 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0993888436 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0769230769 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261478776042 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845033003734 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510902338868 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152711751824 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317148658318 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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