Ordinary people try copy famous persons either watching the t.v or reading magazines.reasons of doing this . Do u think it is good or bad?
It is observed that these days normal individuals follows the eminent personalities like watching on television or by reading magazines. There are certain reasons behind this tendency. This essay will discuss the causes with reasonable perspective.
Certainly,the most prominent factor is modernisation. Initially, it is generally seen that due to the advancement of the technology,it becomes approachable to middle class people to afford the things of luxurious lifestyle on reasonable price. Apart from this, more number of people are educated regarding the ongoing trends in fashion. That is why they, they can easily approach these. For instance, an article published in daily news paper and considered that the number of individuals are literate and knowledgeable than past. Therefore , everyone try to live in a luxury way of Living. Hence, it is clear that plethora of mortals are due to advancement and high literacy rate.
Probing further, according to my perspective this trend has large positive effects on people's life. Firstly, sometimes the previous popular one's lead can encourage to more similar people. For example, earlier sports persons are ideal for today's generations, which motivate them to gain the patriotic feeling not only for personal life, but social welfare also. Along with this, there are some television celebrities like Narinder Modi. These leaders are educating the people from time to time. So that they could not follow the wrong path in life and provides various motivational lectures according to the situation of nation.
To conclude, the regular copy of renowned persons in ordinary dwellers is prevalanting at lage extent beacuse of progress technology and i think it is beneficial for mankind to create new similar personalities and as a saviour from wrong decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44680851064 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9066863748 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673758865248 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4179464517 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3529411765 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190587813874 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504251982742 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471616081252 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118068966273 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552640269373 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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