Organised tour to remote community and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it positive or negative development for people and local environment?
it is undeniable truth that people from industrialized country are visiting remote areas for some region and countries which are still untouched or not modernize by human.this trend is increasing day by day which make some positive as well as negative impact on local people and local environment of that country.On the positive side it boost the economy and create jobs for local inhabitants however negative effect on their local culture by foreign tourist cannot be overlooked.
To explore and isolated community have many merits but predominant advantage of this is it creates employment in that particular area so the people of that region have enough money to get rid of some primary problems and even they can have sufficient funds for bread and butter report of Times of India showed that about 65% of local people are employed in Ghana due to tourism.
Another key feature that affects the remote country positively is development of infrastructure because of this that region is easily accessible and modes of transportation has been built. many airports and roads are being built in Myanmar going to influx of travellers.
On the other hand, tourist from different parts of world can make a negative impact on local residents they encourage them to follow their culture. this is the main reason why local are going far from their rituals.
In conclusion, travelling to remote areas affectes region in various ways and merits are much more higher than its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, well, as for, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08196721311 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65173752574 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.150467614 49.4020404114 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.142857143 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312888221323 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106249589004 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100961827991 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133404159566 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101258274377 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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