The overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government can tackle these problems.
“Instead of controlling the environment of benefit of the population, perhaps it’s time we control the population to allow the survival of environment”. In our contemporary world we face various problems because of crowdedness. This essay will discuss two of these difficulties and their solutions.
Most importantly, most people don’t tend to whether live or face various burdens as a result of overcrowding. In other words, some drivers may spend much time to reach their work distance, many doctors could be late for significant operations and a lot of firefighters wouldn’t be able to prevent disasters from happening. In fact, overpopulation might lead to poverty in health, education, economy and much more. These firm troubles have not only cons but also negative effectiveness.
From my own perspective I suggest that the government should hurry to assist the responsibles to stop this inflation. Firstly, if it is possible to produce more means of flying transportation, it will ease the traffic. For instance: small aircrafts for short distances would be easier than buses, cars or taxies. Here is another suggestion which is our Nile river should be used intelligently by using its spectacular space and allowing more watercrafts to transport people to their remoteness. For more illustration, our country’s principals have to develop current means of transportation in order to avoid tough troubles.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, instead of improving the buildings’ designs or creating new projects may be this is suitable opportunity to discover countless carryings to be helpful facilities to reduce the congestion.
- The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnings according to level of education Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 40
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish Others however argue that it has only made people busier 61
- The amount of money that children s charity in located in USA spent and received in one year 2016 78
- Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment others believe they are a serious threat to energy security Discuss both views an 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41153846154 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26506295417 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688461538462 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0502720158 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0627729170459 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242067300703 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300158001837 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0346516978289 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027954324418 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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