Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you Agree or disagree?
Some people deem that parents should be liable for making their children obese. This essay agrees with this statement because healthy nutritional habits are responsibility of tutors and health problems associated to malnourishment on infants make even more kids become ill adults. However, even though these mentioned aspects, there are some moot points which we will discuss in the following lines.
There are many factors which have impact on children becoming obese, such as genetics and social-economic status. Besides that, nowadays, we are living a pandemic related to a genertion of kids who do not play outside because of the intense use of technological gatgets. Thus, it supposed to explain the gain of wheight on infants.
However, the basic thing on a healthy body for children or adults is conditioned by what we eat. And unfortuntely, it is widely commom parents having their supermarket trollers full of soft-drinks, savoury snacks and sugary food instead of natural fruits and vegetables. As a consequence, many kids are suffering from diabetes and obesity because of the ingestion of industrilized and ultraprocessed food. It is clear that this triggers bad nutrition guided by bad choices. In addition, these future adults will bring their health problems with them in their adulthood, as far as the intense consumerism of unhealthy food in early ages will make them chronically ill people.
To conclude, as we can see, there are many factors which can develop obesity in children associated to social conditions, genetic, or lack of activity, but the main problem is generated by parents who provide low-quality food to their kids. Thus, they are completely responsible for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, so, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30258302583 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8928712605 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4315712668 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191004228453 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619914148441 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754587820801 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106846178144 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436247052862 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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