The bar chart shows the expectation to change of European young people in the next 20 years in 5 different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the view of young-European about the changing of five different fields in the next two decades .
Overall, it is observed that European young people think they will face various problems in the next 20 years. All of the problems surround healthcare, air pollution, water pollution, food quality and communicate with people. Most of them think that four different fields (health, air quality, water quality, and food quality) will get worse more than a half of the percentage. Nevertheless, communication with others seems to be the less issue for them to solve.
Younger people have sense of expectation that air pollution will be the most problematic trouble, only 22 percent of them think about the optimistic perspective. On another sides, water pollution and health quality become the second and the third major worries for them, between 58 percent and 60 percent.
In contrast, 62 percent of European young people won’t think lack of people communication will get worse and the rest (38 percent) worries about this problem. However, the percentage of people think food quality will get worse or will improve is approximately equal, between 49 percent and 51 percent. By this way, it is both urgent and normal perspective to take care of.
In conclusion, the majority thinks they will have to deal with various trouble in many sides, but air quality seems to be the most significant area to solve in the next two decades for youngsters.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-25 | AnnaAlysia | 61 | view |
- In some countries many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food Do you agree or disagree 73
- some people believe that professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in other countries Discuss both views and giver your opinion 73
- Details of politicians private lives should not be published in newspapers To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the best place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- People sleep less than they used in the past What do you think is the reason behind this What are the effects on them 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...different fields in the next two decades . Overall, it is observed that Europea...
^^
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... various problems in the next 20 years. All of the problems surround healthcare, air pollu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the next two decades for youngsters.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, third, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10699588477 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71830702704 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534979423868 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3756592724 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.818181818 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125343731367 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057543386567 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740984251759 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901914634533 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744831384888 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.