Parents should increase children spend less time on studying and more time on doing physical activities to what extent do you agree?
It is beyond any doubt that today's children are under the trap of technology as they study and play on their gadgets. Expertise assume that wards should be motivated by parents to engage in physical activities such as exercise and outdoor games and splurge minimum time on their studies. Iam partially agree with this notion.
There are manifold reasons why I accord with this, First and foremost education is weapon of child to survive in this competitive epoch. Moreover, it is necessary that students ought to be focused on studies to prevent them to indulge in any illegal activity. The reason is, that children will aware about right and wrong with the vast knowledge only.Furthermore, education brings punctuality and discipline among juveniles and today's generation is lacking in these qualities. Apart from this, if a child is disburse less time on studies consequently his/ her grades will low.As a result, one might not be able to occupy a seat in prestigious universities and institutes. Thus, it causes stress and depression which is hazardous for their health.
Numbers points can be mentioned to support latter view, physical activities are as essential as studies. Because it assists hollistic development of child Additionally, if one do not have a healthy body then how he or she can be concentrated on studies.Besides this,these activities burgeons the brotherhood among children's and enhance their sportsmanship. In addition to this, it teaches them to tackle by own with their menaces which is fruitful as they become self dependent.
To recapitulate, both are necessary for child's growth however studies and education must be priority of every child and expend limited time on physical activities and it must be responsibility of parents to make a balance in both.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
...dy and play on their gadgets. Expertise assume that wards should be motivated by paren...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... There are manifold reasons why I accord with this, First and foremost education ...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... and wrong with the vast knowledge only.Furthermore, education brings punctuality and disci...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disbursed'.
Suggestion: disbursed
...alities. Apart from this, if a child is disburse less time on studies consequently his/ ...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...s consequently his/ her grades will low.As a result, one might not be able to occu...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...e or she can be concentrated on studies.Besides this,these activities burgeons the brot...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
... be concentrated on studies.Besides this,these activities burgeons the brotherhood amo...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iority of every child and expend limited time on physical activities and it must ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23183391003 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97666358449 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5154980785 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186508922049 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598385983122 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527543645431 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11771790126 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044794137033 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
...dy and play on their gadgets. Expertise assume that wards should be motivated by paren...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... There are manifold reasons why I accord with this, First and foremost education ...
^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... and wrong with the vast knowledge only.Furthermore, education brings punctuality and disci...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disbursed'.
Suggestion: disbursed
...alities. Apart from this, if a child is disburse less time on studies consequently his/ ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...s consequently his/ her grades will low.As a result, one might not be able to occu...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...e or she can be concentrated on studies.Besides this,these activities burgeons the brot...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
... be concentrated on studies.Besides this,these activities burgeons the brotherhood amo...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iority of every child and expend limited time on physical activities and it must ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23183391003 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97666358449 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5154980785 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186508922049 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598385983122 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527543645431 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11771790126 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044794137033 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.