Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly saying that in life 90% is your luck and 10% is the outcome of your actions.It is assumed that achievement and success in life is based upon one's fortune I am partially agree with this statement.
To commence with my perception,that luck's contribution in one's success is only 5% and rest is person's persistent toil, preseverance and dedication towards their goals. Moreover, hard work assist to build strong personality and tackle with dilemmas. Apart from this, for successful and secure future one should be sheerly concentrated and focused. Besides this, one who survived failures and face ample menaces to grab their opportunities is one who respect their success and stay humble, respectful towards others while lucky person is often seems to be arrogant and uncourteous.
Probing further, that 5% of luck matters a lot in people's life the reason is that one who is eager and working to fetch its dreams always get failure due to its destiny. For instance, a youngster who is perpetually preparing from years to crack in the competitive/civil examinations is always losing its chance by few marks. Here, in this situation luck plays key role. Furthermore, one who decided to be a doctor have a successful career in fashion designing. Consequently,it is it in its destiny.
To encapsulate, one cannot change its fate however failure can be altered into success by regularity, sincerity, dedication towards goals and then luck will also be the part of that success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08979591837 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97992729451 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9816605955 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.363636364 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704653091319 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275182114405 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290318669998 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474856190727 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226205580249 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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