As a part of their education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that students should study abroad in order to get their language and culture better than study in native country. I also advocate the view that students should be invested in studying abroad. This essay will discuss the main reasons why that opinion is more rational than the other.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why it is believed that investing for students to study abroad should be given priority. It is because the students can learn about others’ culture and language better by having conversations with foreigners regularly. For example, the students who study abroad make sure that they can have conversations with the foreigners more naturally and fluently. Furthermore, learning others’ cultures can help people be more confident with their wide knowledge. They can clearly know some information about culture, history, characters, customs and so on about other countries. Therefore, the students who have opportunities to study abroad can have more advantages than other students. Besides, the students can use their abilities so as to find a good job in the future. Moreover, they can easily be promoted at work and get high salaries. Studying abroad is one of the best investments in education for students' future.
On the other hand, studying only in students’ native countries can make the promotion of students in the future difficult. Because they are not given a good education in the field of language and culture similar to other students. In that case they do not have the wide knowledge about the international community like others. Therefore, finding a good job such as the students who have chances to study abroad is really difficult. Moreover, the students can not be promoted at work if they do not have good abilities in communication, skills of working, and specialized knowledge. In addition, the students will be less confident than others, and more serious they can have mental health about their knowledge compared to others. That is the most serious problem which still exists in the modern world.
In conclusion, the students should be invested in studying abroad. Therefore, they can have a good job and high salaries in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16111111111 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71369981145 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2839889013 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4761904762 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140266579271 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573694831006 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453130538364 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101983092959 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255819581269 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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