In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they know only a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
Until recently, most people still lived where they were born. However, some tend to live in the big city. That's the way people change their daily lives.
Several benefits were living in the small towns in the past. Firstly, the people always have a connection, which they looked after another. For example, my mom had to carry heavy bags, her neighborhood came and helped her. People helped others in different situations and know how to deal with them. Secondly, when you were not at home, people around your house would take care of your kids. Thirdly, there was a little crime and has low pollution, which has fewer cars, motorbikes and this meant children get safe there. When the kids were at school, their teachers can pay attention to them, because they were in smaller schools and smaller classes.
On the other side, there were some difficulties when living in small towns. Families in the neighborhood connect, however they also needed privacy. At school, they did not have many facilities for both students and teachers, which meant students did not have good education as well. Especially, when members of the family were ill, they had to go from miles away to the hospital in the city or the next village.
In my opinion, people in my grandparents' generation were happier, but in the modern world, with all the convenient things, it is a pity to live in a small village. There are lots of advantages to living in a large city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ver, some tend to live in the big city. Thats the way people change their daily lives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77290836653 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35329037471 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.205146552 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.875 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321026721933 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10895357404 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916577397447 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211159216265 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831158216206 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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