There are some merits when living in a small community. Firstly, you never feel alone. When living in small villages, everyone knows everyone else, and they are hospitality. As a result, they can talk, play and help each other. If you are in trouble, villagers will give you a hand. For instance, on special occasions like funerals or weddings, all the neighbors are willing to lend a hand to prepare the meals. Secondly, living in the countryside is usually safer than the city. To be specific, in rural areas, people often keep an eye on neighbors' estates. Therefore, the crime rate is lower, and there aren't a lot of housebreaks of burglary and robbery.
However, living in small villages also have a lot of demerits. Firstly, the countryside has few shops and good service. The malls or cinemas were usually not built here. Therefore, if people want to go to the mall or cinemas, they must go a long way to the city. Secondly, it is also hard to find good conditions like the quality of education or health services. For example, it can take hours to bring an ambulance to the countryside.
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- In the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else Nowadays most people live in the large cities where they only know a few people in their area What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68393782383 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60042723502 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1795138266 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2666666667 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24191777399 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707238188591 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801414599107 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180206101542 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542848815127 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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