The choice of storing the knowledge has changed over the time. Earlier people adore to share their moments and memories in books. But now as technology has come in, people prefer to store and share their own information in the net. This essay will firstly discuss storing knowledge in books as one of the main advantage and secondly, it outlines the disadvantages of storing the information in the books. Expressing or making in a note is time consuming while using the internet to share anything has much more advantages than books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Secondly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 401.0 1615.20841683 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 81.0 315.596192385 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95061728395 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.0 4.20363070211 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20840422074 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 51.0 176.041082164 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 128.7 506.74238477 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2311452098 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240383503733 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132452319843 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450796619135 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240383503733 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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