In the past, people store knowledge in books, while now they store on the internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
People always gained knowledge from books or magazines in the past; however, with the development of technology and network, increasingly more individuals use the Internet to store and search information. In my opinion, there are more merits than drawbacks regarding the trend.
To begin with, one of people’s concerns is that there is much information on the Internet without supervision of related departments. Thus, some youth who do not have complete ability of judgment will be misguided by the misleading information on the Internet. For example, there are so many kinds of novels and books, which are difficult for adolescents to identify whether it is detrimental or not.
In addition, one obvious merit is that it is convenient for everyone to acquire the information and knowledge whenever and wherever they need. Meanwhile, various methods can be taken to obtain the knowledge, such as using iPads, smartphones or laptops. Moreover, citizens can also store an amount of information on the Internet without plenty of writing, which is more time-consuming.
Another meaningful advantage is that people in poverty can have easy access to knowledge if it is available on the Internet. Because some books may cost expensively which the poor cannot afford, using the Internet is a better and economic way for them to acquire knowledge.
In conclusion, although too much information and news on the Internet may give people some misleading orientation, the merits clearly overweigh the disadvantages. As long as there is a supervision of the Internet, the concern mentioned above will not be a problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
...ord, using the Internet is a better and economic way for them to acquire knowledge. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06934821053 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.230327141 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221141678317 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724296984555 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597153183048 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114480897866 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028852487803 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.