The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of the advertising but not the real need of the whole society in which they sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, there are many advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that advertising boosts the sales and it encourages people to buy products unnecessarily. Personally, I partly agree with the statement.
On the one hand, many advertising companies use famous and popular actors or singers. It is because they generate attention. Thus, people, especially children, buy goods that their favorite stars advertise, although they do not really need the products. Additionally, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need them but they buy them impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as numerous customers purchase a particular advertised product, others may be affected by the trend, even if the products are not what they need.
On the other hand, many people have their own spending habits, which cannot be changed by advertisements. In addition to advertisements, there are some other factors that lead to the increase in the sales of consumer goods. In the modern society, the living standard has improved and people desire better material life. They have more disposable income to buy what they like, while in the past, they could not afford to do so. Meanwhile, manufacturers update their products constantly to meet people’s increasing need.
In conclusion, it is true that advertising impels people to buy more than they need in some cases. However, it is difficult to say that everyone is influenced by advertisements in making their buying decisions. People’s increasing demand and income also contribute to the high sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41044776119 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08199016861 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7506534235 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221215676472 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689351031268 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427737212115 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134345461751 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345823961704 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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