It is undeniable fact that in this present scenario, people migrate to different places during their lifetime, while in the past they used to stay at the same please forever. There are several specific reasons behind this trend ,from my perspective, it is a negative development which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, for getting a fruitful career and higher level of educational amenity ,contemporary individuals tend to shift to other cities or Nations for settling their business, for an instance, for completing their higher education maximum students are moving to abroad because it allows them to explore more work as a part-time job and educational opportunities along with this, due to obtaining more profit in business sector, most employers migrate to another country, moreover, learning a new language as well as lifestyle and facilities stimulate masses to change their living place. Hence, work and study are the two primary reasons that why people do not prefer to live in the same place for lifetime.
On the other hand, after moving from one place to another place, mostly people have to face some negative consequences. Firstly, due to migration from their home country, they take too long time to become stable or familiar in the new environment. In addition, sometimes cultural difference becomes a major issue and another is weather conditions. Apart from this, living abroad can be expensive which middle class people may not afford as well as they can have lack of communication skill in order to survive a better life or getting a well paid job, for an example, if government provides all sorts of facilities for the citizens, migration may be decreased to certain extent which is revealed by doing a survey in California city.
To conclude, although, shifting to another place has drawbacks, its positive consequences can not be neglected because it gives a chance to people for enhancing their experience and knowledge towards the different religions which makes life easy to lead at any corner of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...rovides all sorts of facilities for the citizens migration may be decreased to certain e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04451038576 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66027669394 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584569732938 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 337.0 20.2975951904 1660% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1700.0 106.682146367 1594% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 337.0 20.7667163134 1623% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 7.06120827912 1600% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354189637707 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.354189637707 0.084324248473 420% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208665917084 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035458491647 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 170.8 13.0946893788 1304% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -279.04 50.2224549098 -556% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 135.9 11.3001002004 1203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.19 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.8 10.1190380762 1352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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