The pie chart depicts the percentage of Coca Cola bottles's sale in five distinct areas in 2000, while the line chart represents the share price of same products from 1996 2001. The data is calibrated in Dollar.
Overall, 30% Coca Cola bottles was sold to North America out of total 17.1 billion which was the maximal sale and it was followed by Latin America with 25.7 percent sale of same bottles. Moreover, population of Europe showed interest towards Coca Cola bottles with 20.5% sale, almost 5% less sale of bottles can be seen through Asia. In addition, Africa and Middle East was the only reason that gained least number of bottles.
Moving to the line graph, in 1996, nearly $35 share was experienced for Coca Cola Bottles and after one year the figure increased sharply to around $68. Moreover, for next six months the share of products was sinked by $12 thenafter, a progressive increasement can be noticed ($80) that was the top position of share price. Additionally, the cost of partnership decreased again to $60 in 1999 and a dip was taken with around $48 in 2000. There was no data of any share in final year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'gained the least'.
Suggestion: gained the least
...nd Middle East was the only reason that gained least number of bottles. Moving to the li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40546176469 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6486138774 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26465056847 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995891664659 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882513164158 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186022429491 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446629643383 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.