In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study in abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
in today era,it is necessary for each and every person to realize the value of Education. but now a days students have a lot of opportunities to go abroad for higher education .this essay will be discuss advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraph.
To embark with, one advantage of pursuing higher education in Abroad student get to interact with new people and learn new culture and language .for example ,after completed the matriculation student want to go abroad for higher education. apart from that,foreign country provides a good job opportunities because they bring new ideas and Technology.
On the other hand, most of the students after completing their course are settle their. further more they will not return to their country because they think in their own country have not good job and opportunities. but this is not true own Nation provides a good job opportunities such as IPS UPSC and many more jobs.for example, many Indian students go to foreign countries such as a United States and America to pursuing their higher education they will not return on their country. in this way, the biggest effect to the growth of the nation and unemployment. to conclude, individual should try to research good job on your own country .apart from that, government has provide the good job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, apart from, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0502283105 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82420737311 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5545037206 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263089225806 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112262129938 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847181328469 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166976499507 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536804094136 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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