The older you get life become more difficult.Discuss
It is irrefutable fact that when people entered of old.They have to face a plethora of difficulties in life like health.I will discuss view point in the upcoming paragraph before reaching to a logical conclusion
To commence with,every people think childhood is finest as compare to adolescent and old age.Because They have no stress regarding study.They fully depend on parents.Morever they always do that type of work .who they liked.Secondly,they entered in a teenage.They have a some responsibility.like related to study,how to set a career and also authority of parents
To continue with, after that there are many authority when they are young like to get a job help the family ,and to give proper time to their children and family .Furthermore, when they are entered in a old age that time they get a tension,because family members do not listen them, they feel tired.For example every body is busy in their own work so they do not listen the sorrow of old people that’s why they suffer from hard disease
To conclude,nowadays every body face a lot of problem to older age.They suffer from a many disease.However their family member do not take care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9641025641 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24561505635 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 195.0 20.2975951904 961% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 968.0 106.682146367 907% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 195.0 20.7667163134 939% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 76.0 7.06120827912 1076% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491870954366 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491870954366 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390157643384 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282524687284 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 99.4 13.0946893788 759% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -126.45 50.2224549098 -252% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 79.3 11.3001002004 702% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.55 8.58950901804 193% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.0 10.1190380762 791% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 80.0 10.7795591182 742% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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