Nowadays, opinions about the similarity of people in the world have diverse interpretations. One group says that all people are not similar. The other considers that they are resemblant. While each person has similar requirements, they are different in terms of thoughts, religions, behaviors, dreams, and lifestyles. Therefore, I partially disagree with the statement.
On the one hand, everyone has general requirements, which makes them live. In other words, all people need to rest and to work. They have to work to earn money, and they have to rest not to lose strength, efficiency, and to stay alive. Moreover, nobody is able to live without food. Everyone needs various types of nourishment for a healthy life. Searching for happiness, desire for peaceful, successful, and healthy life can also be considered as common feature of mankind.
On the other hand, there are a lot of features that people differ with. Religions can be a good example for them. Because even countries differ from each other with religions. Moreover, ethnicity and religion are important to form an opinion during the first contact with foreigners. Additionally, everyone does not live in the same conditions, which forms an individual’s thoughts, behaviors, intentions, and outlook. All people go through various problems during life, they solve problems in different ways, and they experience different things.
To conclude, although people have general requirements, they live given life differently under different circumstances. All these forms different personalities. Therefore, I would partially disagree with the idea that similarities are more than differences among people.
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- Some people believe that hosting international sports events is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both these views and state your opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ligions can be a good example for them. Because even countries differ from each other w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56470588235 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02503713584 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.90442449 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.95 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241646425243 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732265574043 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696816337723 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173483801454 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933484658773 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.08 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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