People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?
Nowadays, competition in this world and struggle for survival has made people workaholics. There is a tendency that today numerous people are struggling to keep a balance between work and life. This essay intends to discuss the possible reasons for this phenomenon and also suggest ways to tackle this issue.
To begin with, there are several reasons that can be considered culprit behind people facing failure in maintaining balance in their work and life. First of all, the contemporary social environment should be responsible for the imbalance between work and life. Specifically, due to education reform, more people are able to attend university and own a high education, which lead to the growing fierce competition. Consequently, in order to survive in competition in workplace, working people need to devote more time to improve their work overcomes. Working overtime has become a common phenomenon. Furthermore, since we now live in a consumerist society, people face more material temptation than before and to fulfill their material desires, some people choose to sacrifice their personal time to work to earn more money. Consequently, due to the competitive working environment and material pursuit, people have less time to spend with family or do household works.
However, there is no doubt that these lifestyles negatively influence on people’s physical and mental health, therefore this situation has to be changed. Initially, people need to establish correct values toward money and family. If someone does not understand that the aim of work if for better life, he/she would never be succeeds in balancing work and life. Reasonable allocation of time and work more efficiently could also help people save time. Apart from it, governments should impose laws about limiting working time to guarantee sufficient rest time for working people.
In conclusion, fierce competition and material desires are the reasons why most people fail to achieve work-life balance. To address this problem, both governments and individuals should make effort.
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| 2019-08-04 | vishal sachdeva | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46728971963 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83193848512 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3368031625 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.235294118 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287716616204 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096853793533 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541628260374 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170720777915 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370635850192 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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