Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, finding a suitable job is uphill task in the era of cut throat competition. The idea of whether we should have ideal, dream jobs which enable us to satisfy with our occupations or stable jobs remain a source of controversy. Some individuals claim that job satisfaction cannot be long-lasting and it is more essential to secure permanent jobs. Actually, it is undeniable fact that the feeling of satisfaction and fulfillment in job is much more important.
On the one hand, it is unquestionable that having permanent jobs is very beneficial. Firstly, these jobs facilitate people to have a stable and carefree life since they have financial support. For example, with stable income monthly, urban dwellers can reckon on their expenses on domestic and social issues accurately which thereby is helpful for them. Secondly, since people do not have to care much about financial problems or job insecurity, they can enjoy life easily such as taking up new hobbies such as sports. Also, people can utilize their spare time to enjoy their own interest. To illustrate, apart from time spent at the office, a banker can also pursuit her own dream job as a gardener in her leisure time.
On the other hand, job satisfaction and fulfillment is much more significant for several reasons. First of all, provided interest, people can definitely devote their energy to what they are doing. By doing so, they are inclined to come up with new, creative and innovative ideas which consequently may greatly contribute to the growth of and efficiency in their works. Moreover, people enthusiastically doing their work become a source of inspiration for others in their community. Journalist, case in point, it was once considered as a difficult work which required a great deal of hardships and intelligence but still an insecure job since they could be dismissed easily due to its severe competition. However, as time pass by, lot of famous journalists performed successfully and inspired a lot of teenagers to pursuit this career.
In my vision, permanent jobs may provide safe future, but satisfaction in job results in growth, efficiency and inspiration for others.
To conclude, it seems to me that although having permanent jobs is important, gaining satisfaction and fulfillment on what we are doing is worthier pursuing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, apart from, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15567282322 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94208147191 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562005277045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6441429137 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348527742458 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123705498358 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859956591922 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216720016605 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747565603067 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.