People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
The use of drugs has been massive in this computer era. Surprisingly, the vast majority of young generation started to consume drugs, both legal and illegal in a very early age of their life. Experts state that parents and general society are responsible for being a bad example for children. In this essay I will examine the primary cause and impact of an increasingly, drugs abuse by youth as well as providing suggestions to help people escape from drug abuse efficiently.
The invention of the Internet is the main reason for helping modern society, especially young people to access drugs much easier than before. There are several illegal websites to commerce illegal items such as drugs which easy to be accessed. Moreover, these illegal websites such as dark web being popular for young people in which they have a plenty of curiosites to commit to wrongdoing actions. Take America as an example, predominantly young people there consume drugs in which they obtain it from dark web. Therefore, internet being first and foremost factor that makes drugs easily to be accessed especially for youngsters.
Addiction is the major impact of drug abuse by young generation. Addicted feeling can make people unable to stop consuming these illegal medicines. Moreover, people who have been addicted to drugs commonly cannot divide responsibilities and desires. For example, drug users are often being irresponsible for their family; yet, some of them even try to kill their relative for getting money to buy drugs. Therefore, consuming drugs is very bad for people due to the negative impact of its addiction substance. The enforcement in technology security to prevent global distribution of drugs on the internet is highly needed for government to prevent young generation accessing illegal medicines. In the meantime long sentences are also crucial for those who commit to this type of crime, hence, young people will think twice before using drugs.
To sum up, the rapid improvement of the internet network is the main factor leading to widespread drug misuse by young people. As a result, negative impact like addiction badly influence their life. So I personally recommend that government should enhance their cyber security system as well as strict regulation for protecting young generation from drug abuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21983914209 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67914147089 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536193029491 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9720265596 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.473684211 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224623141929 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761650680583 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367055471652 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15088900504 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805026138624 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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