People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern era a large chunk of population consumes a significant quantity of drugs. Young children intakes both legal and illegal drugs. There are ample of reasons behind this behavior, but few sociologists blame the elders for the same. Some causes and effects of substance abuse are discussed in the forthcoming paragraph.
The foremost reason is elders are addicted to narcotics in order to cope up with the stress and increasing workload, thereby using it to lighten themselves. For an instance, parents are doing drugs to get rid of post-traumatic stress work. Their children imitate and in cultivate these habits as they consider parents to be their ideals. Secondly numerous celebrities are filmed taking drugs, and the youngsters blindly follow them, neglecting the delirious effects like altered sensorial, anxiety disorders, psychosomatic ailments, insomnia, drowsiness, etcetera. A section of society especially males use numerous drugs nowadays to build their bodies and to look heroic. Lastly numerous sports personalities inject narcotics into their bodies to enhance their efficiency and performance, hence keeping apart one's sportsmanship. For example Maria Sharapova a versatile tennis star consumed selenium which tarnished her reputation. Moreover, she faced anti doping ban for short span of time.
As incidents of substance abuse are increasing at an alarming rate, it is the need of an hour to curb this ailment for the betterment of mankind.
In a nutshell, I would recommend enacting laws and produce statutory regulating bodies to restrict smuggling and its illegal consumption. Public awareness about the harmful effects can be organized by campaigns. Moreover, emphasis can be laid on educating the parents and elders. However if these steps implemented in appropriate directions can lead to significant drop in youth consuming drugs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57894736842 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94681699102 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670175438596 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7469418563 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5294117647 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178664822442 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486569336936 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476486862372 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978341208357 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367412142387 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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