People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and latest technologies.
Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages
In this contemporary epoch various alterations are being deduced upon the commoners regularly through several means to keep them up to the date . I wholeheartedly champion that, despite a few economical profits a plethora of detrimental effects are on the verge as a consequence of this approach being discussed in the impending passsages
To initiate, recent studies conducted previously suggesting us the alarming amount of fundamental supplies being left; pure water, fertile land, essential minerals and many more . These are due to the previous humanitarian efforts made in order to ameliorate standard of living . For instance, in manufacturing latest attires a gigantic heap pf wool,cotton and silk is required to fulfill the demands of rapidly growing population for which producers are pressureized and consequently, to maximize the supply land is fertilized by chemicals and rest of the creatures are humilated to the utmost potential.
Moving further, in spite of fighting two world wars many of the essential metals and minerals are left of their half. Eventually, taking the example of china a news article deduced that ," More gold and copper is extracted from scrapyards instead of their ores". Moreover, in the nearing future demand will be doubled for every product including technological gadgets also and so the value of copper and gold will also which are the most essential elements to make a device run . furthermore, the prominent projects of human race will also suffer from their shortage, consequently human race will get behind several years until an alternative is discovered.
To sum up, undoubtedly we need and up to date lifestyle but not on the deal of our future. Hence, a plethora of reasons are aforementioned to support this verdict .
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- People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and latest technologies Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages 11
- People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and latest technologies Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32978723404 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03698064959 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4604063852 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0439549688457 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0140407941403 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159778490695 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0197709785775 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125685972936 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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