People are getting richer, healthier and live longer nowadays. Nevertheless, they are not happier. What are the causes of this situation and what can be done to address?
In today's fast paced world, human living conditions have been irrefutably improved, thus people are able to fulfill their needs and live much longer than those in the past. However, kinds of research have shown that this ongoing trend does not *correspond with* their happiness. This essay mentions the *underlying factors* that cause this situation as well as some possible steps that could be taken to *address the root.*
The issue of the dissatisfaction of today's youngsters can be attributed to two main causes. In the first place, the influence of commercial advertising seems to be *at the root of this problem*. The growth of materialism has a detrimental influence on consumers' desires. People frequently *feel compelled to* buy unnecessary things due to the massive tangible advertisements. In some cases, they may force themselves to catch up with the latest trend *on the strength of* peer pressure. Young people are the *target audience* for the marketing industry as they *are easily swayed by advertisements* to *adopt the values of the consumer society*. *This actively illustrates* that they are possessing more and more things which, they are told, will bring them the happiness they expect. However, they simply waste their money *by virtue of* their hasty decisions which just satisfy their temporary demands. *Another justification worth mentioning* is that people are living in a competitive world. Although some of them have abundant economic backgrounds, they are still mindful of others' lives. They even involve themselves in a *soul-destroying job* which may cause so much chaos for their mental health as if money is the most crucial aim in their life. As a result, all the above-mentioned have failed to bring happiness, and the *false promises* result in the *disillusionment* among young people.
Nevertheless, steps could be taken to *alleviate* the problem. Firstly, the government must *introduce restrictions* on visual advertising. This means on online platforms, the excessive number of advertisements should be limited, therefore another helpful information can be a substitute. Secondly, another solution to ameliorate the negative impact of this matter is the responsibility of national and local authorities. They should allocate resources to schools to provide opportunities for pupils to participate in outdoor activities or take up a musical instrument. By doing this, today's youth would have been given chances to have more social interaction, rather than having their eyes glued to their phones and becoming the passive consumers of the marketing strategy. These two approaches are highly appreciated and would certainly *help efforts* to bring more fulfilment and cheerfulness into the lives of today's young people.
To sum up everything that has been stated so far, the trend of youngsters' discontentment can be elucidated by several reasons, namely the proliferation of commercials and peer pressure. To prevent this, the intervention of the government and school authorities are two of the most plausible answers.
- People are getting richer healthier and live longer nowadays Nevertheless they are not happier What are the causes of this situation and what can be done to address 84
- People are getting richer healthier and live longer nowadays Nevertheless they are not happier What are the causes of this situation and what can be done to address 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... *This actively illustrates* that they are possessing more and more things which, they are to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 475.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46736842105 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09334017893 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581052631579 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5376070686 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.913043478 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.652173913 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20143778167 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525503173312 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437849404333 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123117146455 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428286251956 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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