People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
In recent years, there are more and more people who tend to drink much fluid consisting of sugar. This phenomenon starts from several reasons, and nowadays scientists give some practical advises to limit the amount of sugar - based drink.
It can be said that there are both subjective explanation and objective one for this problem. First and foremost, the higher living standard gives people more opportunities to have a better life and try a variety of food and drink. They tend to drink some tasty liquid that makes they feel excited and enjoyable than taking insipid one. In addition, the significant development of beverage industry in modern life provide the various kinds of sugar - based drink with reasonable price and attractive packaging products. Of course, the taste is extremely fascinating. Last but not least, sugar can be known as a kind of addictive substances if people use at the huge amount. As a result, people can't help drinking it day by day
One thing we know for sure is that this phenomenon causes some serious diseases for humans health such as obesity, diabetes. Therefore, health experts have some solutions to solve this prolem. Firstly, people need to understand the extreme disadvantages when using sweet drink too often. When seeing these drawbacks, they will themselves decrease the amount to protect their health and their family. Besides, it is an useful solution if replacing the artificial sugar drinks with natural sugar in fruit like juices. This help people to not only keep healthy but also have a fit body.
In conclusion, it is clear that the reasons for using the drinks including sugar almost come from lack of awareness and people should decline the amount of sugar to keep healthy."
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: limiting
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to drink' or 'drink'.
Suggestion: to drink; drink
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sugar to keep healthy.'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63194444444 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5642864122 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1661133566 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374572111806 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117854355215 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887301284167 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23872349648 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604080457476 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.