People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
These days the youngsters are being provided with sugar drinks more than in the past. This essay will attempt to discuss the main reason behind over-consuming also some strategic solutions are explained to address such issues.
Today’s life has been changed a lot, one of which is producing plenty of sugar drinks related to the advancement in the production process. To some extent, scientists have been educated to develop sugary sodas in an efficient way. As a matter of fact, such drinks serve enough energy for individuals, therefore, they become used to them recently. For instance, the ‘Life’ brand’s energy-drinks contain much more sugar than the permission limitation so, people not only have encouraged to buy them but also, they are being addicted to such energy-drinks. As a result, this drink is reported to affect the youngsters’ life considerably.
On the other hand, there are some solutions to tackle this issue. It is worth bearing in mind that the government have a responsibility to monitor the proportion of the ingredients in drinks such as sugar, protein, and carbohydrate. In more detail, today some research has done in Japan which is confessed that the private sectors have not met the minimum requirements and the extra profits are taking care of in these companies. Consequently, should the government set severe restrictions for the industries, people would indisputably experience a healthy lifestyle then safeguard the well-being of the next generation.
To sum up, despite the rational reason behind consuming more sugar-based drink which is based on the effectiveness of the production process, the government is responsible to take steps to handle this issue. Therefore, this department can mitigate all the concerns created by these sodas, for example, the decreasing trend of people’s lives in terms of health humanity because of over-consuming of sugar that can be solved by checking the percentage of ingredients in the drinks industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e been educated to develop sugary sodas in an efficient way. As a matter of fact, such drinks serve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35031847134 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06867584985 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0547572665 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301493234949 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100634848909 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595912929613 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185616694243 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240245867019 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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