People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
In this day and age, people are consuming more sweetened beverage than ever, which is culpable for health problem and one of them is obesity. this is an alarming problem with the increasing percentage of people using these products especially children and young people. The reasons behind this trend will be dicussed in this essay.
there are some grounds accounting for the growing consumption of sugar-based drinks : marketing ploy of some company, presence of addictive substances in them. At first, the commercial of these foutain are widespread advertised even can invite some famous celebrities or athletes to target customers also children and teenager to opt the products. Secondly, they use a abundance of ingredent as they want to enhance the product quality with more flavour when people have different tastes in drinking. Their demand is increasing more and more, so these company set up more business strategy to be conscious of their products. Hence, after having it several times, it will become a bad habit when you drink it regularly without moderation. For instance, Pepsi consists of caffein which is an addictive substance.
several related problems be ancitipated like obesity or dental disease and other health problems in physical and metal. it will makes you acquaint with sedentary life or be binge drinking and eating. Fortunately, several measures could be taken to tackle this problem and help you kick a bad habit. To begin, you should make your own healthy lifestyle by drinking more water instead of soft drinks and other action. you also can participate in campaigns to raise awareness among the citizen about health probem caused by consuming too much sodas. you need to be more careful about the advertisement of soft drink that you can be better.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons and appropriate steps to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16938110749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63161518182 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3780765913 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237747603673 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719193452634 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632855078822 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122197683096 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617658830692 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.