People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve these problems?
These days, individuals are experiencing extended lifespans after their retirement, which gives rise to certain challenges. However, there are potential solutions to address these issues. The growing population of retirees places a considerable burden on society. Firstly, the responsibility of supporting retired individuals falls on the younger generation and the government, who must work more efficiently to meet the financial demands not only for their own daily needs but also for the elderly. Consequently, the workload on workers increases, posing a risk to maintaining the same level of productivity. This, in turn, leads to financial strains on a global scale. Secondly, elderly individuals are more susceptible to illnesses compared to their younger counterparts, necessitating increased usage of public healthcare services. Governments are compelled to allocate substantial funds to modernize healthcare facilities and systems, placing a significant burden on communities in the form of increased taxes to support the national budget.
To mitigate these problems, several measures can be considered. Firstly, the government can conduct awareness campaigns to promote retirement planning among workers at an earlier stage. By encouraging young people to save money and prepare for their retirement, they can reduce their reliance on state pensions, thus alleviating the financial strain faced by the country. Additionally, raising the retirement age can enable older individuals to engage in specific forms of employment. This provides retired individuals with an opportunity to enhance their quality of life through lighter or part-time work, such as taking up roles as security personnel or babysitters.
In conclusion, extended lifespans after retirement present certain challenges. However, by implementing the aforementioned measures, such as raising awareness about retirement planning and increasing the retirement age, it is possible to mitigate the associated problems. By adopting these solutions, societies can work towards ensuring a smoother transition into the phase of retirement and better support their aging populations.
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- People are living longer after they retire What are the problems What can be done to solve these problems 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00977198697 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22197096226 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5838330812 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139734380053 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471334186393 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041137160456 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103304969963 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442000141369 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.