People are living in a 'throwaway society', using things for a short time and then throwing them away.
What are the causes of this?
What problems does it lead to?
It has become a commonplace to see people purchase goods and only use them for a short period of time. This is happening because of some underlying factors of the modern world and also, this development is leading to severe consequences that are hazardous for all creatures. This essay will list some causes of throwaway culture firstly, then describe several problems which it can entail secondly.
One cause of a throwaway society is a short-lived commodities. Products being manufactured nowadays have very short expire date so that consumers can utilize them for a short time span. Much of foodstuff produced nowadays ,for example, spoils quickly and people have to put it in a litter box. As a result, they not only spend their finances, but also waste resources.
Another cause of this culture is a variety of products available for consumers. In comparison with the past, more merchandises are produced in today's world than in the past contributing to consumerism. To illustrate, if four or five decades ago people had to wear clothes till uselessness, now individuals can afford to buy clothes and wear them how long they want.
A major problem that is occurring is contamination of ecology. Since people stop making a use of goods , governments have to eliminate these disposes by either burring it or burning, but still consequences of these processes also harm the environment and surrounding habitats. Many villages might be a case in point. They are exposed to smoke of burning garbage which pollutes the air;consequently, these people become deceased with cancer and other illnesses.
To conclude, there are some causes and negative effects of a throwaway culture. While the main reasons of it are the short usage and wide range of goods, the major issue happening is the ecological devastation. In my opinion, people should deal with this dilemma as fast as possible, if they want to save the planet Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05974842767 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86692840956 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3497883761 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6470588235 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254122597253 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076233071762 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679345284842 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130297734425 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722440234872 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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