People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
In the Last century, many people especially youth prefer to go to the universities or colleges for different reasons. They enroll for their future and their ambitious. In addition, they tend to think that they can find better career or increase their knowledge. In this essay, I will discuss this topic and give some of their reasons.
It is certainly obvious, register in the universities or colleges is one of the most important options that many people want to choose unconsciously. Besides, in many countries, it is the only way to growing or find a job unfortunately. Scientist researches in 2015 illustrate that more than 72 percent of people in underdeveloped countries believe that education is the only and the most reliable way to find a job and augment their incomes. For instance, pupil in Iran think that if they can enroll in the university, the future would be extraordinary significant. Personally, I have graduated from the university 8 years age and after that I found my ideal job.
Moreover, many students think by graduating from the university, their value in the society would be increased so they make effort to graduate from the university. From my point of view, going to the university has effect on their behavior and in many cases it leads to rising their social situations. For example, people respect the doctors or engineers and they usually do not pay attention to the workers.
All in all, in spite of that education and going to the university or college affect people life, I believe that we should not force children to go to the university and we should help them to find their abilities and interests because if they do not enjoy their field in the university, they will not success in the future. In my view, they should chase their dreams eventually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...n to go to the university and we should help them to find their abilities and interests because i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in many cases, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85342019544 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80172710977 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504885993485 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4023585343 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206740031982 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813501571448 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676281917573 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13834653042 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269821189057 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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