People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
These days, education plays an important role. Attending colleges or universities is considered to be one of the most crucial decisions of a person’s life. A university or college degree often helps a person to achieve his goal with more ease. There are several reasons why people decide to embark on university or college life.
First of all, universities and colleges provide people the environment to acquire knowledge and valuable skills irrespective of the fact that they may be available and accessible on the Internet so that they don’t need teachers or books to get information. However, they can not make out whether it is essential for their studies or not. In universities and colleges, there are many teachers as well as professors, with abundant teaching experience who give students with lots of new knowledge and help them to solve their problem in their study. By entering the universities and colleges, students can develop their critical thinking which enables them to distinguish poor information from rich information so that it becomes real knowledge. Besides, learners can develop fundamental skills namely: communication, presentation, teamwork problem-solving skill and many more. The universities and colleges are the exact places all over the world that were designed and conceived to help students get through the learning process.
The second reason why people decide to go to university or college is that they will improve their opportunities for jobs and have better career preparation for the future. It can not be denied that academic qualifications are obligatory in certain professions. For instance, there are some jobs such as teacher, lawyer or doctor that people can not apply for if they don’t have some relevant degrees. There is no doubt that the people who do have universities or colleges degree have a much smaller chance of being jobless. Besides, most colleges drop out will end up being undervalued by their employers and will end up being underpaid. Consequently, graduates can open up the new world of opportunities and get high salary in the upcoming time.
In conclusion, people attend colleges or universities for many reasons and purposes such as having a good future job, having a new experience, and building relationships, etc. In my opinion, no matter what reasons they decide to attend colleges and universities for, studying in colleges and universities is a preparation for their future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30534351145 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03680586292 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513994910941 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.277039787 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346177991804 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116125357131 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104913749938 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243955728907 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964893158183 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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