People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Recently, having further education for students would be beneficial and some people believe that higher level of education in universities or colleges might provide superior opportunities such as job prospects in the future. I am inclined to believe that higher education and university attending can be a plus and I will discuss my reasons throughout this essay and reach a reasonable conclusion.
First and foremost, universities provide a varied range of knowledge in different aspects of the science which are useful for their next career. It means that students could learn many theories about the different aspect of science that some would be practical in their future career. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I perform an academic examination with real statistics which discovered people who attended the university or colleges are more prepared for the job vacancies in the companies. Thus, attending the university provide beneficial consequences for students as well as companies.
Secondly, the students' team-working and social skills would be improved by attending the universities or colleges. In fact, universities provide a wider society for students and help them to interact with different people with various types of characteristics. Besides, wider society has much more problems which students have to find the solution to overcome them on their own or based on team-working skills. Therefore, it is correct to consider university experiences play a significant role as a mentor for students.
To conclude, attending the universities or colleges might have several reasonable reasons such as better job opportunity or knowledge improvement. Apart from that, I mention my own reasons in detail throughout this essay as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53649635036 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10196864819 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2729672703 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34348909002 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133671593188 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726613352655 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212814996916 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544904732258 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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